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NOTE Neural narration; phrase times estimated within exact synthesized scene segments.

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Start with a label. The workshop was messy. The reader knows

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your judgment but cannot yet picture the room.

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Choose a clue. Three mugs balanced on a pile of sawdust.

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One concrete detail creates a scene.

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Make it earn its place. Choose details that support your purpose.

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More adjectives do not automatically make a clearer picture.

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Keep the useful summary. Summary is useful too. Use a vivid

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detail where you want the reader to pause and imagine.